By the looks of the carefully arranged trash in a pattern that is often seen throughout NZ camping spots, I'd say the perpetrators were German.
get much close.
IMVHO, you need to choose the subject then make it 'pop'. ie - choose the spider, find context to show how awesome it is, then try and get rid of the interfearance using contrast, colour, and depth of field. Or choose the web, whatever, but it seems you went for both and then neither were overly impressive. Two shots with better DOF and composition would have said a lot more IMO.I am very noob so could be very wrong. I also think a little bit of fiddling with levels/post process stuff can help with that too if you are stuck - up a ladder or behind a crap camera as I was.